Overall it is good. There are some small errors through the text (for example you would be better to say "Posez moi toutes les questions que vous voulez") - "une question" is feminine, and it is much better to user the verb "poser" rather than "demander" in such a case. You shouldn't say "demander une question." After that at the end you could end with something like "C'est tout ce qui me vient � l'esprit." You are doing very well with your studies though, so keep learning and you will get even better.
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